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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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1. When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and tried to escape; however, the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair was crushed under a mountain of rubble.
2. When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and tried to escape, but the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair was crushed under a mountain of rubble.
2. When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and tried to escape, but the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair was crushed under a mountain of rubble.
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When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and attempted to escape, but the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair were crushed under a mountain of rubble.
- When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and attempted to escape, but the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair were crushed under a mountain of rubble.
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When the Heroes of the Lance infiltrated Pax Tharkas and initiated a slave revolt, the Dark Queen’s servant Eben Shatterstone took Berem and attempted to escape, but the fortress’s defense mechanism was triggered and the pair were crushed under a mountain of rubble.
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