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Marix998 Posted 15 years ago
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Which one sentece is correct

Hello,

could you write me which one of sentence below is correct.

UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations on the workplace and remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.

or

UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations on the workplace and would remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.

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Hi, could you write me which one of sentence below is correct. UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations in on the workplace and remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something. or UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations in on the workplace and would remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.

  • Hi, could you write me which one of sentence below is correct.
  • UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations in on the workplace and remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.
  • or UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations in on the workplace and would remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.
  • You don't need to repeat 'would'.
  • I find the last part of the sentence a bit awkward.
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Hi,

could you write me which one of sentence below is correct.

UPG believed that an open approach, informal meetings and communication would strengthen relations in on the workplace and remove fear of employees if they wanted to say something.

or

UPG believed that an open approach

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