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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
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Which one of these two sentences sounds better?

Hi,

Which one of the following sentences sounds better?

- To assess the differences of the level of driving performance of women and men, we used a young age group of 20-29 years old.

- In this study, to assess the differences of the level of driving performance of women and men, a young age group of 20-29 years old was used.


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I suggest this. eg To assess the differences in the level of driving performance of women and men, we looked at people 20-29 years old.

— Clive

  • I suggest this.
  • eg To assess the differences in the level of driving performance of women and men, we looked at people 20-29 years old.
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I suggest this.

eg To assess the differences in the level of driving performance of women and men, we looked at people 20-29 years old.

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