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Gillyflower Posted 8 years ago
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Which one of these two sentences is correct or sounds better?

Hi,

Which one of the following sentences is correct or sounds better?

- "The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, proteins, and DNA which ultimately result in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs."

- "The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, proteins, and DNA, ultimately resulting in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs."


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The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, protein s a nd DNA , which ultimately results in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs. The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, protein s a nd DNA, ultimately resulting in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs.

  • The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, protein s a nd DNA , which ultimately results in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs.
  • The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, protein s a nd DNA, ultimately resulting in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs.
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The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, proteins and DNA, which ultimately results in cell death and destruction of body tissues and organs.

The excessive increase in ROS leads to damaged lipids, proteins and DNA,

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