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Lilac Posted 21 years ago
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1. Award for most Creative in the "Starnet Digital" Cup of webpage designing contest among college students in Hangzhou.
2. Award for best originality of "Star-Web-digital" cup in webpage design of universities and
colleges in Hangzhou.
I don't konw whether you understand what I want to express. I want your help~~~ help me to amend the sentence.
2. Award for best originality of "Star-Web-digital" cup in webpage design of universities and
colleges in Hangzhou.
I don't konw whether you understand what I want to express. I want your help~~~ help me to amend the sentence.
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- 5555, who can help me?
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1. Award for most creative in the "Starnet Digital Website Design Cup", a contest open to college students in Hangzhou.
2. Award for best originality in the "Starnet Digital Website Design Cup", a contest open to college students in Hangzhou.
2. Award for best originality in the "Starnet Digital Website Design Cup", a contest open to college students in Hangzhou.
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Starnet Digital Website Design Cup
can we put website design in this position?
can we put website design in this position?
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All the suggestions made so far look to be particularly clumsy! What is the context here? Are these headings to go on a webpage, for example? Or are they to appear in a magazine article, or similar?
If the latter, I would suggest something like:
This contest, open to college students in Hangzhou, is for the most creative website, and the winner will be awarded the "Starnet
If the latter, I would suggest something like:
This contest, open to college students in Hangzhou, is for the most creative website, and the winner will be awarded the "Starnet
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I think you misunderstood me.
This sentence will be used in my resume. I attend a web design competition which was held among college students in HangZhou city, and my work was considered to be most creative.
It's hard work for me since I want a brief but clear and formal sentence in my resume.
who can help me?
Maybe, I should begin the sentence with "Awa
This sentence will be used in my resume. I attend a web design competition which was held among college students in HangZhou city, and my work was considered to be most creative.
It's hard work for me since I want a brief but clear and formal sentence in my resume.
who can help me?
Maybe, I should begin the sentence with "Awa
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OK - that makes things much clearer! I would therefore suggest:
I was awarded the XYZ Cup for the most creative original design. This award was open to ...
I was awarded the XYZ Cup for the most creative original design. This award was open to ...
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In that case you may write it this way. Remember to place under "Achievements".
Winner - Most Creative
"Starnet Digital Website Design Cup" - a collegiate website design contest
Hangzhau City(?), China
Winner - Best Originality
"Starnet Digital Website Design Cup" a collegiate website design contest
Hangzhau City(?), China
You may do away wit
Winner - Most Creative
"Starnet Digital Website Design Cup" - a collegiate website design contest
Hangzhau City(?), China
Winner - Best Originality
"Starnet Digital Website Design Cup" a collegiate website design contest
Hangzhau City(?), China
You may do away wit
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