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RJD Posted 12 years ago
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Pease confirm us the completion date on the following works officially at the earliest.
Pease advise us the completion date on the following works officially at the earliest.
  

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They are both very stilted and awkward at best. Here is something formal with a better structure: At your earliest convenience, please advise us of the official completion dates of the following projects: Project Restore World Peace Project Eliminate Hunger Project Annihilate Polio At your earliest convenience, please confirm the official completion dates of the following projects: Project Restore World Peace: 12/31/2015 Project Eliminate Hunger: 12/31/2014 Project Annihilate Polio: 08/31/2014

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  • They are both very stilted and awkward at best.
  • Here is something formal with a better structure: At your earliest convenience, please advise us of the official completion dates of the following projects: Project Restore World Peace Project Eliminate Hunger Project Annihilate Polio At your earliest convenience, please confirm the official completion dates of the following projects: Project Restore World Peace: 12/31/2015 Project Eliminate Hunger: 12/31/2014 Project Annihilate Polio: 08/31/2014
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They are both very stilted and awkward at best. Here is something formal with a better structure:

At your earliest convenience, please advise us of the official completion dates of the following projects:
Project Restore World Peace
Project Eliminate Hunger
Project Annihilate Polio

At your earliest convenience, please confirm the official completion dates of the foll
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