Please see the attached application form received from staff member, Mr. Bentley for sick leave
Please see the attached application received from staff member, Mr. Bentley for sick leave
I'd delete the comma in both examples. Do you need to say 'staff member'? Do you need to say his name, since it is undoubtedly on the form?
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I'd delete the comma in both examples.
Do you need to say 'staff member'?
Do you need to say his name, since it is undoubtedly on the form?
ie Please see the attached application for sick leave.