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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Which one is grammatically sound?

The AMX controller has been repaired and collected from the dealer on 02/02/2018.

Upon repair of the AMX controller, we collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.

  

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The AMX controller has been repaired . We collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018. Upon repair of the AMX controller, we collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.

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  • The AMX controller has been repaired .
  • We collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.
  • Upon repair of the AMX controller, we collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.
  • #1 above is a bit more natural.
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The AMX controller has been repaired. We collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.

Upon repair of the AMX controller, we collected it from the dealer on 02/02/2018.

#1 above is a bit more natural.

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