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Fanti Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Which one is correct and why?

The report shows human lives increasingly entwined with digital technologies.
The report shows human lives are increasingly entwined with digital technologies.

Both seems correct to me though
  

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They are both unremarkable grammatically, but only the second one means what it ought to. The first says that the report displays a depiction of lives entwined with tech. It probably does, but I'll bet that's not what is meant.

  • They are both unremarkable grammatically, but only the second one means what it ought to.
  • The first says that the report displays a depiction of lives entwined with tech.
  • It probably does, but I'll bet that's not what is meant.
  • The second says that the report reveals that our lives are entwined with it.
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They are both unremarkable grammatically, but only the second one means what it ought to. The first says that the report displays a depiction of lives entwined with tech. It probably does, but I'll bet that's not what is meant. The second says that the report reveals that our lives are entwined with it.

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