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RJD Posted 16 years ago
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Which one is correct and appropriate?

This is to confirm that we did not receive the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet. We only received two wooden boxes which contain TV and HiFi systems, but this particular was not found to be received along with the items.

This is to confirm that the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet was not found to be received with the items. We only received two wooden boxes which contain TV and HiFi systems.
  

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Hi, The active voice is better, more direct and more energetic in tone. This is to confirm that we did not receive the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet. We only received two wooden boxes which contain ed the TV and HiFi systems.

— Clive

  • Hi, The active voice is better, more direct and more energetic in tone.
  • This is to confirm that we did not receive the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet.
  • We only received two wooden boxes which contain ed the TV and HiFi systems.
  • but this particular was not found to be received along with the items.
  • This is to confirm that the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet was not found to be received with the items.
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Hi,

The active voice is better, more direct and more energetic in tone.



This is to confirm that we did not receive the rotating mechanism for the TV cabinet. We only received two wooden boxes which contained the TV and HiFi systems. but this particular was not found to be received along with the items.

This is to confirm that the
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