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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Which one is correct?

Please arrange to book the ticket for the staff members who are going on vacation with the following details.
Please arrange to book the ticket for the following staff members who are going on vacation with the details below
  

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The phrase at the end is awkward in both sentences. Can you expand to two sentences? [ Please arrange to book the ticket(s) for staff members who are going on vacation.

— Philip

  • The phrase at the end is awkward in both sentences.
  • Can you expand to two sentences?
  • [ Please arrange to book the ticket(s) for staff members who are going on vacation.
  • Include the following details...
  • ]
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The phrase at the end is awkward in both sentences. Can you expand to two sentences? [ Please arrange to book the ticket(s) for staff members who are going on vacation. Include the following details... ]
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