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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Please note that we received only 9 packages as per the airway bill provided, but the packing list shows 10 packages were shipped.

Please note that we received only 9 packages as per the airway bill provided, although the packing list shows 10 packages were shipped.
  

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). First highlight the error, then follow it up with the reality. Hope this helps.

  • ).
  • First highlight the error, then follow it up with the reality.
  • Hope this helps.
  • John
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I would say:

Although the packing list shows 10 packages were shipped, please note that we received only 9 packages as per the airway bill provided (included?).

First highlight the error, then follow it up with the reality.

Hope this helps.

John

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