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IMDJ Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Which one is correct?
As you are aware, we have delivered only the requested items at the request of Mr. X, no other items were delivered / As you are aware, we have only delivered the items as per the request from Mr. X, no other items delivered.
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Both are ok but the first repeats request/requested making it not as easy to read. The second is more formal and reads easier - use the second one!
- Both are ok but the first repeats request/requested making it not as easy to read.
- The second is more formal and reads easier - use the second one!
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Both are ok but the first repeats request/requested making it not as easy to read. The second is more formal and reads easier - use the second one!
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The punctuation is wrong in both, and the phrasing is stilted. Use this:
As you are aware, we have delivered only the items requested by Mr. X. No other items were delivered.
As you are aware, we have delivered only the items requested by Mr. X. No other items were delivered.
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