Which one is correct?

As increasing the project work, I would like to employ six more persons to my department. So, I request you to kindly approve as requested. Also, note that two of them among in this new squad will be worked as securities at our new Project, and remaining will be worked as site workmen



Due to the lack of manpower, we can't cope with the current increasing project work as required. So, I would like to employ six more persons to our department. two of them among in this new squad will be worked as securities at our new Project, and remaining will be site workmen.

Under the circumstances, I would request you accede to this request and kindly do the needful