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Eltina Posted 10 years ago
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Which one is better?

1. Working with your design and development team, we are able to provide support in the whole process of your product developing.
2. Working with your design and development team, we can provide support throughout the product development process.
Which one is better? I prefer 1. What do you think?
  

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Hello, Eltina—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Eltina Which one is better?

  • Hello, Eltina—and welcome to English Forums.
  • Thank you for registering as a member.
  • Eltina Which one is better?
  • I prefer 1 Your first is rather informal for the context, but I don't like either, with their reiterated roots.
  • I suggest: Working with your team, we can provide support throughout the product design and development process.
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Hello, Eltina—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
EltinaWhich one is better? I prefer 1
Your first is rather informal for the context, but I don't like either, with their reiterated roots. I suggest:

Working with your team, we can provide support throughout the product design and development process.
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Wow! Thanks so much!!!

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