The doorbell rings. Julie, sleeping on the couch, instantly wakes up.
The doorbell rings. Julie, asleep on the couch, instantly wakes up.
The doorbell rings. Julie instantly wakes up on the couch.
Which one do you prefer? It's for a script, so it needs to be in the present tense.
anonymous The doorbell rings. Julie, sleeping on the couch, instantly wakes up. The doorbell rings.
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anonymousThe doorbell rings. Julie, sleeping on the couch, instantly wakes up.
The doorbell rings. Julie, asleep on the couch, instantly wakes up. <<<
The doorbell rings. Julie instantly wakes up on the couch.
Which one do you prefer? It's for a script, so it needs to be in the present tense.