Which one do you prefer?
Hi teachers. Are all of the four sentences grammatically correct? Which one do you prefer? Thank you in advance.
As she looks around she is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress.
She looks around and is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress.
She looks around when suddenly she is drawn to a beautiful red dress.
She looks around as she suddenly is drawn to a beautiful red dress.
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As she looks around she is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress. OK. Put a comma after 'around'.
- As she looks around she is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress.
- OK.
- Put a comma after 'around'.
- She looks around and is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress.
- OK She looks around when suddenly she is drawn to a beautiful red dress.
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As she looks around she is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress. OK. Put a comma after 'around'.
She looks around and is suddenly drawn to a beautiful red dress. OK
She looks around when suddenly she is drawn to a beautiful red dress. Incorrect.
She looks around as she suddenly is drawn to a beautiful red dress. Not incorrect, but awkward.
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