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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Which of these sentences is better...
Can someone please let me know which of the better sentences is better and why?
1. Because of the risk in investing in a unlimited-transaction economy, the spending of one dollar typically requires much more risk appetite in such an economy than in a single- or limited-transaction economy.
2. Because of the risk in investing in a unlimited-transaction economy, the spending of one dollar in such an economy typically requires much more risk appetite than in a single- or limited-transaction economy.
Thanks in advance
1. Because of the risk in investing in a unlimited-transaction economy, the spending of one dollar typically requires much more risk appetite in such an economy than in a single- or limited-transaction economy.
2. Because of the risk in investing in a unlimited-transaction economy, the spending of one dollar in such an economy typically requires much more risk appetite than in a single- or limited-transaction economy.
Thanks in advance
Top answer
I prefer the first. ).
- I prefer the first.
- ).
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I prefer the first.
It should be "an unlimited-transaction economy" (even though I have no idea what one of those is!).
It should be "an unlimited-transaction economy" (even though I have no idea what one of those is!).
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But would you also prefer the first one. More importantly, curious to know 'why' one choice over the other.
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