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Goldenboy1 Posted 7 years ago
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Which of the following paragraphs read well to you?

Which of the following paragraphs read well to you?

The engineer has attended and investigated the pumps, but unfortunately, he cannot find the problem. So, he has advised us to contact the manufacturer to get someone on site to carry out further investigations. Hopefully they will find out the problem.


The engineer has attended and investigated the pumps, but unfortunately, he doesn't know what the issue is . However, he has advised us to contact the manufacturer so that they can get someone on site to carry out further investigations. Hopefully they will find out the problem.

  

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The first one is better because the second one indicates that the engineer didn't understand the nature of the problem at all, not even why he was called to investigate. The last sentence should be something like We hope they can determine the problem.

  • The first one is better because the second one indicates that the engineer didn't understand the nature of the problem at all, not even why he was called to investigate.
  • The last sentence should be something like We hope they can determine the problem.
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The first one is better because the second one indicates that the engineer didn't understand the nature of the problem at all, not even why he was called to investigate.

The last sentence should be something like

We hope they can determine the problem.

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