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Rayman55 Posted 11 years ago
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Which makes sense/is better?

"Electrics delaying your project? This e-book summarises the benefits of contracting in electrics."

Or

"Don't let electrics cause delays in your projects. Read our e-book to learn how to avoid setbacks."
  

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The second one is more attention-grabbing and forceful. Not sure if that's just how I read it, but the second one is my choice.

  • The second one is more attention-grabbing and forceful.
  • Not sure if that's just how I read it, but the second one is my choice.
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The second one is more attention-grabbing and forceful. Not sure if that's just how I read it, but the second one is my choice.

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