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Tamguatlay Posted 12 years ago
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Which is the better sentence? Is 'have passed away' OK

Today, you attended this ceremony in order to repay your debts of gratitude to your family members, relatives and friends who have passed away. This is an important act as a Buddhist./ This is important behaviour for a Buddhist.

1. Regarding the second sentence, which is the better one?
2. Is 'have passed away' OK?

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Today you have attended this ceremony in order to express your gratitude to your family members, relatives and friends who have passed away. This is an important act as a Buddhist .

— Mister Micawber

  • Today you have attended this ceremony in order to express your gratitude to your family members, relatives and friends who have passed away.
  • This is an important act as a Buddhist .
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Today you have attended this ceremony in order to express your gratitude to your family members, relatives and friends who have passed away. This is an important act as a Buddhist.
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