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Tamguatlay Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Which is the better sentence?

TRAFFIC ACCIDENT INVOLVING CAR ABC AND CAR XYZ

Enclosed is a letter dated 2.9.13 on the above subject from the Traffic Police Department for your follow-up action.

Enclosed is a letter on the above subject dated 2.9.13 from the Traffic Police Department for your follow-up action.

Which is the better sentence?

Thanks.
  

Top answer

I slightly prefer the first one. Both are OK, though.

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  • I slightly prefer the first one.
  • Both are OK, though.
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I slightly prefer the first one. Both are OK, though.
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