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Dsas gh Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

which is the best paragraph?

A.
This is an announcement The members of the accountin department has to be assembled right now. This is last my announcement If u guys are a member of the accountin department plz gather in accountin department in the conference room thank u.
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This is the announcement. All employees from accounting are asked to get together at the conference room. This is the final remainder. All the member of staff engaged in accounting need to proceed to the conference room. Thank you.

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Make sure for you to know of this announcement. All employees from accounting department are asked to get together at the conference room. remind the folloing is final notice. All the member of staff engaged in accounting department should come to the conference room. Thank you.
  

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A - has the most errors (usage, spelling) B - the best of the three, but not perfect. C - non-native English

  • A - has the most errors (usage, spelling) B - the best of the three, but not perfect.
  • C - non-native English
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A - has the most errors (usage, spelling)
B - the best of the three, but not perfect.
C - non-native English
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Can you tell me why the paragraph C is non-native?

And I appreciate for correcting the sentence B.

Thank you.
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AlpheccaStarsA - has the most errors (usage, spelling)B - the best of the three, but not perfect.C - non-native English
Can you tell me why the paragraph C is non-native?

plz correct the paragraph B.
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Make sure for you to know of this announcement. Not natural. Instead say: Make sure you listen to (read, pay attention to) this announcement.
All employees from the accounting department are asked to get together in the conference room.
remind the folloing is final notice. (There is no subject. Instead say: We remind you that this is the final notice.)
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B.
This is an announcement. All employees from accounting are asked to get together in the conference room. This is the final reminder. All the members of staff engaged in accounting need to proceed to the conference room. Thank you.

"Members of staff" is better written just "staff." You can have "members of the accounting department" or "accounting departm
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AlpheccaStarsB.This is an announcement. All employees from accounting are asked to get together in the conference room. This is the final reminder. All the members of staff engaged in accounting need to proceed to the conference room. Thank you."Members of staff" is better written just "staff." You can have "members of the accounting department" or "accounting department
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dsas ghI have another question.
If you have an unrelated question, start a new thread.

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