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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Which is correct?

This is going on a flyer advertising a shopping area for parents to go to while their children are buying gifts in a secret gift store. Which is correct please? I wrote the first but have been told it should be the second.
1) New this year! A little shopping haven for while your little ones are choosing their gifts in the secret gift room.
2) New this year! A little shopping haven for you while your little ones are choosing their gifts in the secret gift room.
Thank you.
  

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I prefer the second.

  • I prefer the second.
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