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Desafinado Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Which is correct
returning goods or returning of goods in this sentence?
Mine : In this regard, managing returning goods efficiently is vital to companies.
Corrected sentence : In this regard, efficiently managing the returning of goods is vital to companies.
Mine : In this regard, managing returning goods efficiently is vital to companies.
Corrected sentence : In this regard, efficiently managing the returning of goods is vital to companies.
Top answer
Both have problems of awkwardness. For one thing, I suspect that 'in this regard' is a useless addition: it usually is. Managing goods returns efficiently is vital to companies.
- Both have problems of awkwardness.
- For one thing, I suspect that 'in this regard' is a useless addition: it usually is.
- Managing goods returns efficiently is vital to companies.
- Efficiently management of goods returns is vital to companies.
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Both have problems of awkwardness. For one thing, I suspect that 'in this regard' is a useless addition: it usually is.
Managing goods returns efficiently is vital to companies.
Efficiently management of goods returns is vital to companies.
Managing goods returns efficiently is vital to companies.
Efficiently management of goods returns is vital to companies.
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