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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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which is better or correct
0 Hi, 02 br
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00 Please take a note of stylistic differences and tell me how can I write it better or correctly when listing things out while keeping the whole content in more or less one sentence (few sentences). 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned for you to partake in in the future 01 u 00 and they are 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned ahead for you to participate in 01 u 00 like 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned ahead for you, 01 u 00 for example 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 0-
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00 Please take a note of stylistic differences and tell me how can I write it better or correctly when listing things out while keeping the whole content in more or less one sentence (few sentences). 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned for you to partake in in the future 01 u 00 and they are 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned ahead for you to participate in 01 u 00 like 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 02 br
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00 We have many seminars planned ahead for you, 01 u 00 for example 02 u 00 : ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th; XXX Seminar in Dingsong on Novemberr 24th, and ZZ Seminar on December 24th. 0-
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02 br 02 br 01 font 01 i 01 u 00 If these are just examples 02 u 02 i 00 We have many seminars planned for you, including the 02 font 01 font 00 ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th, the *** Seminar in Dingsong on Nov. 24th, and the ZZ Seminar on Dec.
- 02 br 02 br 01 font 01 i 01 u 00 If these are just examples 02 u 02 i 00 We have many seminars planned for you, including the 02 font 01 font 00 ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep.
- 5th, the *** Seminar in Dingsong on Nov.
- 24th, and the ZZ Seminar on Dec.
- 02 font 02 br 01 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 01 i 01 u 00 If these are the complete list, and not just examples 02 u 02 i 00 We have many seminars planned for you.
- They are the 02 font 01 font 00 ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I suggest this. 02 br
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01 font 01 i 01 u 00 If these are just examples 02 u 02 i 00 We have many seminars planned for you, including the 02 font 01 font 00 ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th, the *** Seminar in Dingsong on Nov. 24th, and the ZZ Seminar
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00 I suggest this. 02 br
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01 font 01 i 01 u 00 If these are just examples 02 u 02 i 00 We have many seminars planned for you, including the 02 font 01 font 00 ZZZ Seminar in Dongding on Sep. 5th, the *** Seminar in Dingsong on Nov. 24th, and the ZZ Seminar
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0 Number 3 is better. None of them are really incorrect. It is just #2, to say "-to participate in" just makes it repetitive. And in #1, saying "and they are" just don't flow as smoothly because it feels like you need a comma there. 02 br
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00 Oh, and you might want to be careful on what you really want to say. In sentence #1, you are listing 01 i 00 all 02 i 0
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00 Oh, and you might want to be careful on what you really want to say. In sentence #1, you are listing 01 i 00 all 02 i 0
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