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OrcaDeen Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Which is better & why?

0Please comment on the following sentences by determining 00which is better and why02br
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01b001-A-"I paced forward and greeted him, then, in return, he interlocked our arms and suggested we walk together along the watercourse. "02b02br
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01b00 B-"Pacing forward and greeting him, he interlocked our arms and suggested we walk together along the watercourse"02b02br
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01b002-A-"After we walked a short distance, he said :"........"02b02br
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01b00 B-"After a short distance walk, he said : "......"02b02br
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01b00 C-"After walking 01u00for02u00 a short distance , he said: "......."02b02br
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01b003-A-"I marvel that00 a man gives distress half a chance to eat away at his heart and the hunger for vengeance to deprive him from a wink of sleep although he can cast both aside by praying."02b02br
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01b00 B-"00 I marvel that a man allows distress to eat away at his heart and the hunger for vengeance deprive him from a wink of sleep while/although he can cast both aside by praying"02b02br
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01b00Thanks in advance02b0-
  

Top answer

0Hi,02br 02br 00Where did you find these? They all sound pretty archaic in terms of syntax and vocabulary. Do you want us to update them?

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00Where did you find these?
  • They all sound pretty archaic in terms of syntax and vocabulary.
  • Do you want us to update them?
  • 02br 02br 00Why bother?
  • 05002br 02br 00Clive010id4
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0Hi,02br
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00Where did you find these? They all sound pretty archaic in terms of syntax and vocabulary. Do you want us to update them? 02br
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00Why bother? 05002br
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00Clive010id4
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0Well, you lefted up my spirit02br
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00thanks a million for it02br
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00But I find it a problem sometimes when I have more than one way of arranging the sentence and at the end I come to the conclusion that I'm failure050010id2
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0Hi,02br
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00You're not. Your English is pretty good.02br
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00Clive 050010id1
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0Hi,02br
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00Thank you so much for your nice complements. It is due to your continuous support02br
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00But I really mean it, for sometimes i feel my Englis is Arabian English ........hehe02br
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00Orca[A]0-
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