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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Which is better?

Hello! Which of the following options is better? Maybe neither? Any suggestions?

Diagnostics of body’s problematic areas has become broader.

Diagnostic options of body’s problematic areas has become broader.

Thank you in advance! Emotion: smile
  

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Well, 'options' certainly sounds wrong, and 'problematic areas' does not sound very clinical, either. What does it mean, especially 'broader'?

— Mister Micawber

  • Well, 'options' certainly sounds wrong, and 'problematic areas' does not sound very clinical, either.
  • What does it mean, especially 'broader'?
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Well, 'options' certainly sounds wrong, and 'problematic areas' does not sound very clinical, either. What does it mean, especially 'broader'?
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it should mean that there are more and more opurtunities for testing (please keep in mind that this is a text for printed advertisment and this is not a strictly clinical text)
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In what way broader? To whom is this advertisement directed?
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this advertisment will be directed to the clients of a specific wellness centre. With "broader" I mean that there are more and more diagnostic tools for diagnosing the body's problematic areas, for example, excessive fat tissue, cell abnormalities etc.
Thanks!
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We offer a wider range of diagnostics for your physical condition.
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