Which IELTS band would my essay get?
I realise it was changed substantially but that is because you said my second paragraph was not clear at all, and my topic sentence did not cover the ideas in the paragraph. I did try to follow your comments, honestly! Sorry if it went wrong (( I do appreciate all your comments and corrections, but what I really need at the moment is some understanding where I stand with my writing, whether my IELTS band might be about what I need or much lower. Have you got any ideas what band my essay could be worth? This is my main question. If you can, please advise. And thanks again!
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Your second body paragraph is still no good. Take a look at my reply in the following link to learn about essay structure. 5 at a stretch, but no more.
- Your second body paragraph is still no good.
- Take a look at my reply in the following link to learn about essay structure.
- 5 at a stretch, but no more.
- PM me if you decide to tackle another topic.
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Your second body paragraph is still no good. Take a look at my reply in the following link to learn about essay structure.
I would say the above would get a 6.0, or 6.5 at a stretch, but no more.
PM me if you decide to tackle another topic.
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