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Newguest Posted 14 years ago
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Which I have already mentioned before
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One increasingly popular type of meditation, which I have already mentioned before is called guided meditation. Guided meditation is a particular type of meditation which is intended for people who really need to achieve a focused, higher state of consciousness during meditation.
--- Is it OK to put that phrase there?
One increasingly popular type of meditation, which I have already mentioned before is called guided meditation. Guided meditation is a particular type of meditation which is intended for people who really need to achieve a focused, higher state of consciousness during meditation.
--- Is it OK to put that phrase there?
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Yes, but you still need a second comma (after before). Also, "before" seems completely redundant, if not incorrect, there. On reflection, it seems that "before" should be "earlier".
- Yes, but you still need a second comma (after before).
- Also, "before" seems completely redundant, if not incorrect, there.
- On reflection, it seems that "before" should be "earlier".
- (earlier can be omitted)
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Yes, but you still need a second comma (after before). Also, "before" seems completely redundant, if not incorrect, there.
On reflection, it seems that "before" should be "earlier". (earlier can be omitted)
On reflection, it seems that "before" should be "earlier". (earlier can be omitted)
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Hi,
A small comment about style.
You have used the word 'meditation' 5 times in two sentences. Native speakers like to avoid a lot of repetition.
Can you think of ways to eliminate some of these 5 words?
A small comment about style.
You have used the word 'meditation' 5 times in two sentences. Native speakers like to avoid a lot of repetition.
Can you think of ways to eliminate some of these 5 words?
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