Which bothered him
1) Jim was on his own in a hotel and Tom had gone fishing with his friends, which bothered him.
Is Jim bothered merely by the fact that Tom has gone fishing with his friends, or by that fact and also by the fact that he was on his own in a hotel?
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1) Jim was on his own in a hotel and Tom had gone fishing with his friends, which bothered him. I s Jim bothered merely by the fact that Tom has gone fishing with his friends, or by that fact and also by the fact that he was on his own in a hotel? The sentence is unclear and poorly constructed.
- 1) Jim was on his own in a hotel and Tom had gone fishing with his friends, which bothered him.
- I s Jim bothered merely by the fact that Tom has gone fishing with his friends, or by that fact and also by the fact that he was on his own in a hotel?
- The sentence is unclear and poorly constructed.
- In terms of grammar, it's not even clear that 'him' refers to Jim, not to Tom.
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1) Jim was on his own in a hotel and Tom had gone fishing with his friends, which bothered him.
Is Jim bothered merely by the fact that Tom has gone fishing with his friends, or by that fact and also by the fact that he was on his own in a hotel?
The sentence is unclear and poorly constructed.
In terms of grammar, it's not even
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