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Nader75 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

where is the mistake in this clause

where is the mistake in this clause and what is the right
Do not be so happy to be less sad, then you
will not be nervous and will be stretched (relax)
and so you will play guitar well
  

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Well, you have about four or five clauses there, Nader, and the whole sentence seems rather awkward. Maybe you should rewrite it more simply.

  • Well, you have about four or five clauses there, Nader, and the whole sentence seems rather awkward.
  • Maybe you should rewrite it more simply.
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Well, you have about four or five clauses there, Nader, and the whole sentence seems rather awkward. Maybe you should rewrite it more simply.

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