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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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"In his new book, Quest for Adventure, the renowned British mountaineer Chris Bonington examines the past century's most remarkable expeditions, profiling such explorers including Neil Armstrong, Thor Heyerdahl, and Maurice Herzog."
Is there a grammar and/or usage error in the sentence above?
Is there a grammar and/or usage error in the sentence above?
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I didn't spot an error it is an error. " profiling such explorers as or profiling (renown) explorers including, would be my choices.
- I didn't spot an error it is an error.
- " profiling such explorers as or profiling (renown) explorers including, would be my choices.
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I didn't spot an error it is an error. I wouldn't say, "profiling such explorers including...."
profiling such explorers as or profiling (renown) explorers including, would be my choices.
profiling such explorers as or profiling (renown) explorers including, would be my choices.
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