Where is my grammar mistakes?

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Hello everyone, dear community of forum. Could you show me please, my grammar mistakes?
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A volcano throws gases, liquid and solid things with a high temperature. It becomes a reason of destruction a different constructions and people deaths.
A lava and other things drain throught the slopes of mountain and burning all what they are meeting on their way, bringing an uncountable deaths and huge losses.

The desertification is the process of conversion a fertie lands in a desert. Due to a critical weather, drouths, as a result of a human activity the lannds trasformed in desserts.

The tornado is a strong atmospheric vortex, which differents by frequents iterations. Meteorological experts consider that one of the most possible reasons tornados appearance related to the global warming. Every year the temperature in the atmosphere increase, so we should exept more "gifts" from nature.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

DanilWhere is my grammar mistakes?

I have underlined them.

Hello everyone, dear community of forum. Could you show me please, my grammar mistakes?
Kind Regards

A volcano throws gases, liquid and solid things with a high temperature. It becomes a reason of destruction a different constructions and people deaths.

A lava and other things drain throught the slopes of mountain and burning all what they are meeting on their way, bringing an uncountable deaths and huge losses.

The desertification is the process of conversion a fertie lands in a desert. Due to a critical weather, drouths, as a result of a human activity the lannds trasformed in desserts.

The tornado is a strong atmospheric vortex, which differents by frequents iterations. Meteorological experts consider that one of the most possible reasons tornados appearance related to the global warming. Every year the temperature in the atmosphere increase, so we should exept more "gifts" from nature.

Danil · Answer

Mister Micawber thank you very much for your instantaneous answer.

"Kind regards", - Mr. Micawber, do you mean that I should use this sentence "Kind regards" in the end of letters?

Mister Micawber · Answer

DanilKind Regards", - Is this wrong? Dear Sir, may I kindly ask you? Where is the mistake in this sentence?

Only 'Kind' is capitalized. It should read 'Kind regards'.

Danil · Answer

Thank you very much, Mr. Micawber. I know this and I don't know, why I wrote 2 capitalized letters.

"dear community of forum", - I should use a big "D", after comma?

A volcano throws gases, liquid and solid things with a high temperature. It becomes a reason of destruction a different constructions and people deaths.

In the word "throws" I have added "s" at the end, because I though that it was present simple and third person, who require of adding letter "s" in the end.

"liquid and solid things", I can't understand, whats wrong in this words

It becomes a reason of destruction a different constructions and people deaths.

"a reason of", - I shoud write "the reason of" ?

"a different constructions", - I should write "various of constructions"?

"people death", - I should write "deaths of people" ?

A lava and other things drain throught the slopes of mountain and burning all what they are meeting on their way, bringing an uncountable deaths and huge losses.

"A lava" - or without "A", or when whe are talking about particular things we should use "The"

"things drain throught", I should use a different words?

""slopes of mountain" - slopes of mountains?

Mister Micawber · Answer

Danil"dear community of forum", - I should use a big "D", after comma?

No. 'Dear Forum community'.

DanilIn the word "throws"

Wrong word. 'Ejects'.

Danil"liquid and solid things", I can't understand, whats wrong in this words

Get rid of 'things'—always. Find specific words. Here, 'gases, liquids and solids'.

DanilIt becomes a reason of destruction a different constructions and people deaths.

I have no idea what you mean by 'constuction', but otherwise:

'It becomes an instrument of destruction and death.'

DanilA lava and other things drain throught the slopes of mountain and burning all what they are meeting on their way, bringing an uncountable deaths and huge losses.

'Lava' is uncountable. 'Throught' is not a word. You have many problems.

Lava and debris run down the mountain slopes, burning all they meet and bringing innumerable deaths and huge losses.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Hi Danil;

Many of your errors are in misspelling. Check a dictionary.
Other frequent errors are the misuse of articles (a, an, the), non-agreement of subject and verb, and inappropriate word phrases.

Try writing simpler sentences first. Also, you can post your sentences one or two at a time. It is difficult to work on a passage with so many mistakes.

Danil · Answer

Mr. Micawber, thank you very much for your correction!

I have no idea what you mean by 'constuction', but otherwise:

I mean `construction`

Get rid of 'things'—always.

Okay, I will forget it

AlpheccaStar, thank you very much for your correction, I will improve my knowledge!

Kind regards

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