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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Where do i put the comma at in this sentence or do it need one at all.

When Michael came home from the war, he gave melaine a warm embrace to show how much he missed her.

While Lisa was serving her time in prison, they had her in a restrictive area for 6 months.
  

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Anonymous When Michael came home from the war, he gave melaine a warm embrace to show how much he missed her. While Lisa was serving her time in prison, they had her in a restrictive area for 6 months. I think it's OK like this.

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  • Anonymous When Michael came home from the war, he gave melaine a warm embrace to show how much he missed her.
  • While Lisa was serving her time in prison, they had her in a restrictive area for 6 months.
  • I think it's OK like this.
  • Both your sentences start with introductory adverbial elements.
  • Placing commas after them is correct.
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AnonymousWhen Michael came home from the war, he gave melaine a warm embrace to show how much he missed her.

While Lisa was serving her time in prison, they had her in a restrictive area for 6 months.
I think it's OK like this. Both your sentences start with introductory adverbial elements. Placing commas after them is correct.

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