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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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When you have exceeded 10000 posts, I do believe...

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01font00When you have exceeded 10000 posts, I do believe you will be a forum guru. In case they don't let you to be a forum guru because you are a not from U.K, and if I would be still using the EnglishForward then I will be the first one to protest against that.02br
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0I've highlighted your errors for you. Hope this helps.02br
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00By the way, John only needs 5000 posts to be a guru and some of our gurus aren't from the U.K. Thanks.01blockquote
01cite10Jackson661212cite11font10Dear John,12font12br
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01cite10Julielai12cite10I've highlighted your errors for you. Hope this helps.12br
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10By the way, John only needs 5000 posts to be a guru and some of our gurus aren't from the U.K. Thanks.11blockquote
11cite20Jackson661222cite21font20Dear John,
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0Hello Jackson,02br
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00I don't think Julielai's online at the moment, so I'll try to answer your questions:02br
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01font00Dear John,02font02br
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01font00When you have exceeded 10000 posts, I 01del00do02del00 believe you will be a forum gu
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01cite10MrPedantic12cite10Hello Jackson,12br
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10I don't think Julielai's online at the moment, so I'll try to answer your questions:12br
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11font10Dear John,12font12br
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11font10When you have exceeded 10000
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00When you have exceeded 10000 posts, I believe you will be a forum guru. 01u00In the event that02u00 they don't let you 01u00become02u00 a forum guru because you are not from 01u00the02u00 U.K, and if 01u00I am still02u00 using EnglishForwar
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0I beg to differ, Yoong Liat. "Then" here means "at that time". 02br
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00I'll let a grammarian explain this though-- I'm no good at parsing sentences.0-
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0I agree with YL that the comma could be placed either before or after the word 'then' -- depending on whether Jackson wanted to say 'at that time' or not. 050010id1
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10Hi Jackson,12br
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10The tone and flow of the paragraph was not what
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00I didn't consider YL's suggestion to be wrong; I merely think the correction is unnecessary. 02br
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00... if I am still using EnglishForward then, I will be the first one to protest.02br
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00...if I am still using EnglishForward, 01b01i00then 02i00I will be the first one to protest. (You
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