when u r down

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Behold....
How strong the wind is blowing now
Perceive...
Its touching on your skin
If you succeed to close your eyes
You will find yourself in a world of dreams
And what... do u enjoy the sounds
They clang and clank throughout the time
U smile, how sweet the world of dreams is!
Just keep on closed your tearful eyes

Forget...
That there was some hope
Keep up...
It is how u should behave
I know it is hard to open eyes
But time has come...
U've been too long trapped in a self-wilful pleasant cave

Beta234 · Accepted Answer

great!

Blue-eyed Smiler · Answer

0Thank u, Beta02br
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00It is a bit of how I felt, that is it0-

Anonymous · Answer

0To live, is a dream02br
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00each day, a part02br
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00a piece, a component02br
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00of a unsolved puzzle.02br
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00A mystery, not of life02br
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00but of ones' self.02br
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00What is it to be irrational?02br
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00Such a question, I wonder what she seeks02br
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00a validation?02br
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00I wish, if only,02br
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00if only she could see02br
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00in validation one will find nothing but an opnion02br
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00an opinion ready to cling and sting,02br
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00an opinion trigerring an extinct instinct02br
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00that one desire, i remember was always present..02br
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00the one that kept me wishing for more,02br
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00the one that kept me staring at the stars02br
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00pondering what kind of mutated lives live02br
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00pondering the dark side of the moon02br
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00ponderind the future, oh how that validation lead me02br
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00to who I am today.0-

Blue-eyed Smiler · Answer

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00Anon,02br
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00I find deep feelings of emptiness in your writing.02br
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00You see, we need that validation, however bitter it is.02br
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00Life is a puzzle, u r right.But finding coherent parts is what we need to make sense.02br
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00Finally, it is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.02br
00 0-

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