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When three brothers...

Hi, is this sentence grammatical correct and understandably?

When three brothers in search of her kidnapped sister by an unknown group, the siblings discover there’s more to their father past than meets the eye.

  

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Not quite. Say eg When three brothers go in search of their sister , kidnapped by an unknown group, the siblings discover there’s more to their father 's past than meets the eye.

  • Not quite.
  • Say eg When three brothers go in search of their sister , kidnapped by an unknown group, the siblings discover there’s more to their father 's past than meets the eye.
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Not quite.

Say eg When three brothers go in search of their sister, kidnapped by an unknown group, the siblings discover there’s more to their father's past than meets the eye.

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