When thou tookest upon thee to deliver man means When you gave yourself the task of rescuing mankind (from sin/death) Thou tookest is a second person singular form that is not used in English today. In today's English it would be You took . Thee is the matching form for the object of the sentence (like he/him, she/her).
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