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Mr. Tom Posted 9 years ago
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When the venom of a snake is overproduced, it...

Hi

Does this sentence sound OK to your native ears -- at least grammatically?

(Villain subtly threatening the hero)

There is a saying well-known in our tribe: When the venom of a snake is overproduced, it sometimes bites a stone to release it.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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" seems neater.

— GPY

  • " seems neater.
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"When a snake produces too much venom, ..." seems neater.

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