When the lights are down - a very old and quick poem

1b00this one was written about 4 years ago and my English's knowledge was lesser than now. It was also written in a very impulsive way, in a dark period of my life. I haven't changed the text even knowing there are lots of errors because it represents a part of my life and I like how it turned out. I'm not going to change it, but comments and critiques are appreciated.02b02br
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00WHEN THE LIGHTS ARE DOWN02br
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00Living in fear02br
00you don't know why02br
00your mind get crazy02br
00you can't understand it at all.02br
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00Living in fear02br
00get restless and blind02br
00your life no longer yours02br
00but what's controlling you.02br
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00Pain-all around02br
00pain-in you02br
00pain-can't get out of this shit02br
00pain-yor most known enemy.02br
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00Your friends-gone02br
00your love-too02br
00your soul-none02br
00your heart-empty.02br
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00You and your solitude02br
00what a couple, she and you02br
00with depression-for a tea in the garden02br
00an happy meeting to decide your destiny.02br
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00And your friends...02br
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00telling you things'll go better02br
00telling you hope never dies02br
00telling you you're not alone02br
00but where are they, when you need them?02br
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00All hypocrisies.02br
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00They can't know how life is dark when all the lights are down.0-