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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
When Tears Came By
when tears came by
stopping me on my way
i couldn't control
my emotions overflowing
stopping me on my way
to the valley of death
my emotions overflowing
till i was out of breath
to the valley of death
i just went to visit
till i was out of breath
to get away from sorrow
I just went to visit
the abode of heaven
to get away from sorrow
and not to cry again
the abode of heaven
was all peaceful as ever
and not to cry again
I swore when i saw that
was all peaceful as ever
i couldn't control
a happy smile now
when tears came by.
stopping me on my way
i couldn't control
my emotions overflowing
stopping me on my way
to the valley of death
my emotions overflowing
till i was out of breath
to the valley of death
i just went to visit
till i was out of breath
to get away from sorrow
I just went to visit
the abode of heaven
to get away from sorrow
and not to cry again
the abode of heaven
was all peaceful as ever
and not to cry again
I swore when i saw that
was all peaceful as ever
i couldn't control
a happy smile now
when tears came by.
Top answer
Well, I think this is an unrhyming pantoum.
- Well, I think this is an unrhyming pantoum.
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I think it is too!
'When tears came by' is a good line and title.
MrP
'When tears came by' is a good line and title.
MrP
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