Hi, all. Does "when suddenly" seem perfectly normal here? Also, would you put a comma before it?
People shoot him angry looks. He tries to compose himself when suddenly the building starts shaking again.
anonymous Does "when suddenly" seem perfectly normal here? It's fine. anonymous Also, would you put a comma before it?
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anonymousDoes "when suddenly" seem perfectly normal here?
It's fine.
anonymousAlso, would you put a comma before it?
No.
CJ