If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments? Thanks in advance.<br/><br/>1. When/or what are the important date in your country? 1967 is an important date because that year, we achieved independence from France. <br/><br/>2 What are essential parts of economy in your country? In my country, farming is an important part of economy. <br/><br/>3. How is the economic state in your country? Korea has a very strong economy.