When I will have more experience
Hello,
In one of my motivation letter, I wrote:
« Later on, when I will have more experience as a Salesperson, I plan on gaining responsibilities... »
Should it be « when I have move experience »
I am trying to figure out if my sentence is correct or not, can you help me ?
If my sentence in incorrect, how bad does it look when you read it ?
thanks in advance !
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MichXD14 Should it be « when I have move experience » Yes, but there is a typo, of course. MichXD14 If my sentence in incorrect, how bad does it look when you read it ? It is obviously written by a non-native speaker because of the verb.
- MichXD14 Should it be « when I have move experience » Yes, but there is a typo, of course.
- MichXD14 If my sentence in incorrect, how bad does it look when you read it ?
- It is obviously written by a non-native speaker because of the verb.
- Another thing, "I plan on gaining responsibilities" would be better as "I hope to take on more responsibility".
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MichXD14Should it be « when I have move experience »
Yes, but there is a typo, of course.
MichXD14If my sentence in incorrect, how bad does it look when you read it ?
It is obviously written by a non-native speaker because of the verb. Another thing, "I plan on gaining responsibilities" would be better as "I hope t
0MichXD14Should it be « when I have move experience »
Yes. We don't combine the subordinators if or when with will or would. So you don't want clauses like the following:
when I will have problems Wrong.
if he would be late Wrong.
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