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Cat navy 425 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

When I was plucking a flower

Dear all,

Please tell me whether the following sentences are correct and natural. If no, please correct it.

1) When I was plucking a flower from the rose plant a thorn pricked my arm and stayed inside.


Thank you.

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Try to avoid using a lot of words to decsribe a simple and familiar event. When I was plucking a rose, I got a thorn in my arm. Clive

  • Try to avoid using a lot of words to decsribe a simple and familiar event.
  • When I was plucking a rose, I got a thorn in my arm.
  • Clive
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Try to avoid using a lot of words to decsribe a simple and familiar event.

When I was plucking a rose, I got a thorn in my arm.

Clive

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