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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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When I submitted my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to...

Please edit/correct the following text:

To whom it may concern:

When I submitted/forwarded my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to submit some of the documents and also forgot to sign the cover letter because that day my grandmother was gravely ill and I was rather in hurry. Please include the given documents in my file. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Best regards,
Jackson
  

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Jackson6612 Please edit/correct the following text: To whom it may concern: When I submitted my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to submit some of the documents and also forgot to sign the cover letter because that day my grandmother was gravely ill and I was rather in a hurry. Please , include the given documents in my file. Sorry for the inconvenience.

  • Jackson6612 Please edit/correct the following text: To whom it may concern: When I submitted my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to submit some of the documents and also forgot to sign the cover letter because that day my grandmother was gravely ill and I was rather in a hurry.
  • Please , include the given documents in my file.
  • Sorry for the inconvenience.
  • Best regards, Jackson
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Jackson6612Please edit/correct the following text:

To whom it may concern:

When I submitted my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to submit some of the documents and also forgot to sign the cover letter because that day my grandmother was gravely ill and I was rather in a hurry
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FandorinPlease, include the given documents in my file.
Please include ... (comma not needed)
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Hi,
Here are a couple more comments.

To whom it may concern: <<<< Don't say this. say 'Dear Sir', or 'Dear Mr. Smith' if you know the name.

When I submitted/forwarded my application on November 11, 2008 I failed to submit some of the documents and also forgot to sign the cover letter because that day my grandmother was gravely ill and I was rather in hur

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