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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
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When his father wish to
Can someone tell is there any grammatical mistake? Thanks in advance.
When his father wish to get autographs from The Red Warriors team leads him from Johor Bharu to Kota Bharu. His trip brings a lot of bittersweet memories and he treasures them every minute in his life.
Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a Kelantanese football team, The Red Warriors. When an unexpected accident causes the sudden death of Wan`s father, his whole life turns upside down. Wan then finds out that his father`s dream to get autographs from all the players has never been fulfilled. Thus, Wan Raja goes on a journey from Johor Bahru to Kota Bahru, facing all sorts of obstacles, in order to realize his father`s dream.
When his father wish to get autographs from The Red Warriors team leads him from Johor Bharu to Kota Bharu. His trip brings a lot of bittersweet memories and he treasures them every minute in his life.
Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a Kelantanese football team, The Red Warriors. When an unexpected accident causes the sudden death of Wan`s father, his whole life turns upside down. Wan then finds out that his father`s dream to get autographs from all the players has never been fulfilled. Thus, Wan Raja goes on a journey from Johor Bahru to Kota Bahru, facing all sorts of obstacles, in order to realize his father`s dream.
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When his father wish to get autographs from The Red Warriors team , leads (this verb has no subject) him from Johor Bharu to Kota Bharu. His trip brings a lot of bittersweet memories and he treasures them every minute of his life. Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a Kelantanese football team, The Red Warriors.
- When his father wish to get autographs from The Red Warriors team , leads (this verb has no subject) him from Johor Bharu to Kota Bharu.
- His trip brings a lot of bittersweet memories and he treasures them every minute of his life.
- Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a Kelantanese football team, The Red Warriors.
- When an unexpected accident causes the sudden death of Wan`s father, his whole life turns upside down.
- Wan then finds out that his father`s dream to get autographs from all the players has never been fulfilled.
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When his father wish to get autographs from The Red Warriors team, leads (this verb has no subject) him from Johor Bharu to Kota Bharu. His trip brings a lot of bittersweet memories and he treasures them every minute of his life.
Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a K
Wan Raja’s father is a number one fan of a K
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Thanks for your kind feedback. Please check the revised short plot as below.
When Wan finds out that his father's dream has never been fulfilled, he goes on a journey from Johor Bahru to Kota Bahru, facing all sorts of obstacles, in order to realize his father's dream.
When Wan finds out that his father’s dream has never been fulfilled, he goes on a
When Wan finds out that his father's dream has never been fulfilled, he goes on a journey from Johor Bahru to Kota Bahru, facing all sorts of obstacles, in order to realize his father's dream.
When Wan finds out that his father’s dream has never been fulfilled, he goes on a
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