0
Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
When he or should he
His main character weakness is his occasional stammer, and his social anxiety, both of which are especially pronounced should he talk to not only females, but all attractive, intimidating, and forthright people too.
Top answer
Anonymous When he or should he 'when' sounds better to my ear. 'should' is not wrong. Your sentence needs more help, though.
- Anonymous When he or should he 'when' sounds better to my ear.
- 'should' is not wrong.
- Your sentence needs more help, though.
- For one thing, it seems that at the beginning he has one weakness, but just a few words later he suddenly has two.
- At the end it seems you should be using 'any' instead of 'all' and the preposition 'to' needs to be repeated for clarity.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Anonymous When he or should he'when' sounds better to my ear. 'should' is not wrong.
Your sentence needs more help, though. For one thing, it seems that at the beginning he has one weakness, but just a few words later he suddenly has two. At the end it seems you should be using 'any' instead of 'all' and the preposition 'to' needs to be repeated
0
Related Questions