Does this sentence work?
When I saw her on the way to school in the morning, I lay in bed thinking about her at night and often had a good dream.
The logic is off here. ", this would be followed by something relating to the same time as when you saw her. "
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The logic is off here. When you say, "When I saw her on the way to school this morning...", this would be followed by something relating to the same time as when you saw her. For example:
"When I saw her on the way to school in the morning, she was wearing a tank top and mini skirt."
Then you might follow this with: "Then, that night, I lay in bed thinking about her,