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Taka Posted 9 years ago
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Does this sentence work?


When I saw her on the way to school in the morning, I lay in bed thinking about her at night and often had a good dream.

  

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The logic is off here. ", this would be followed by something relating to the same time as when you saw her. "

  • The logic is off here.
  • ", this would be followed by something relating to the same time as when you saw her.
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The logic is off here. When you say, "When I saw her on the way to school this morning...", this would be followed by something relating to the same time as when you saw her. For example:


"When I saw her on the way to school in the morning, she was wearing a tank top and mini skirt."


Then you might follow this with: "Then, that night, I lay in bed thinking about her,

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